Includes typescript and galley proofs of Chapter 1 "The command of the sea. Guadalcanal [Solomon Islands] and New Guinea" annotated with suggested amendments and corrections by various people including Denis Kelly, William Deakin, WSC, Charles Wood, Emery Reves [earlier Imre Revesz], [George] Gordon Allen, 1st Lord Ismay, 1st Lord Cherwell [earlier Frederick Lindemann] and Lieutenant-General Sir Henry Pownall.Some source material also present including 7 notes from Allen on naval issues including outline notes for the chapter and on oceanic warfare.