Includes galley proofs annotated with comments and suggestions by Sir Edward Marsh of the following chapters: Chapter 22 "War"; Chapter 23 "The Admiralty Task"; Chapter 24 "The Ruin of Poland"; Chapter 25 "War Cabinet Problems" (provisionally entitled "The Baltic: Catherine: New Construction" and "War Problems"); Chapter 26 "The Front in France"; Chapter 27 "The Combat Deepens" (provisionally entitled "Progress of the Conflict, Winter 1939"). Also annotated with comments and suggestions by various individuals including WSC and William Deakin.Also includes: galley proofs of appendices to volume 1, including Appendix N "Extract from War Diary of U.47, November 28 1939" and Appendix F "Tables of Naval Strength, September 3 1939".Although the material in this file has been listed in published order, it is not all in this order within the file.