Includes typescript, manuscript, and galley proofs annotated with suggested corrections and amendments from various people including: WSC, "Mr D" or "F W D" [William Deakin, literary assistant], "H R P" [Lieutenant-General Sir Henry Pownall], [secretaries] "K H" [Kathleen Hill], [Elizabeth Gilliatt], and [Lettice] Marston [later Lettice Shillingford], "E M" [Sir Edward Marsh], and Sir Norman Brook [later 1st Lord Normanbrook, Secretary of the Cabinet] .Also includes: provisional chapter notes entitled "Finland and Norwegian Ore" and "The Norway Peninsula"; copy of book 2 table of contents; sections provisionally intended to feature in the chapter entitled "War Cabinet Problems"; proofs of contemporary minutes and notes from WSC for incorporation into the chapter.