Includes typescript and galley proofs annotated with suggested corrections and amendments from various people including: [George Gordon] Allen, "F W D" or "Mr D" [William Deakin, literary assistant], WSC, "E M" [Sir Edward Marsh], [Lieutenant-General Sir Henry Pownall], and [secretary Elizabeth Gilliatt].Also includes: proofs of contemporary telegrams, letters, and minutes from WSC for incorporation into the chapter; a table on the organisation of the "hunting groups" against the pocket battleships.